in the mind of the lame

I wish i had a wish to share with you
a wish that was kind and true.
something that could get you through the night,
marking the dark in a glorious, angelic light.
Though i know that you are cold and wary,
I wish I could show you the worlds not so scary.
from my wish that I share with you
I wish that it was me and you, through and through.




erm so I'm night excactly a great poet so... haha

i like it but thats just me

why thank you

welcome

when the night calls
hear the moon
when the moon falls
I will be there soon.
crawling in the dawning light
the early birds take their flight.
watch them fly far and free
while tied and hold back we will be.
something that beautifull not fair not kind
though who am I to speak my inner mind.

sounds like a song

I think most poetry are like songs.... waite....


hmm that would make for a kinf of depressing song though lol

so happy songs are boring a never get any real appeal in the world

that is so true! heartache and what not arethe most popular material written and they aren't excactly what you would call happy songs

I love your poems. and yeah the best material is all abotu heartache and misery. thats why i get my best work after something terrible happens in my life like my friend dying.

oh my gosh!! I am sorry about your friend...though thank you for the compliment

Dont worry about it. Your poetry is good. Dont doubt yourself.